M. C. Escher’s Relativity
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In this deranged world
Which way is down or up?
Faceless humans taking every route…
Ceilings are sidewalls,
And what you think is a stair,
Is really a floor.
If you are going up in one direction,
You are upside down in another.
Don’t be surprised when you see the man.
Waking down the wall,
Not even spilling the contents of his satchel.
The man relaxing on the bench,
Is not tumbling down.
Nor will he ever.
For in this infernal world,
Nothing makes sense.
By Emily
October 22nd, 2007 at 1:43 pm
Praise:
I like how you formatted your poem. I really got a picture in my mind.
Question:
What does “M.C Escher’s Relativity” mean??
Polish:
Check to see if everything goes together.
October 22nd, 2007 at 1:57 pm
i like the begining of the poem and the good vocabulary (way better than mine) i also don’t think anything should be changed. i don’t have any questions or suggestions so i don’t know what else i’m supposed to say