Superhero News event
SUPER HERO ON CAMPUS!
It was 1:09 pm on a Tuesday afternoon when Jefferson High School got served a small helping of justice. “It was so RAD!” said Frank Smith. Someone happened to be stealing iPods, Laptops, backpacks, and other important items when Miss. Appear noticed. She wasn’t the only one who noticed something though. Most superheroes have a secret identity, and someone thought this one was no exception. She decided to follow Miss. Appear around to see if she could catch her in the act of changing into a normal girl. Miss. Appear started following the thief in hopes of him accidentally leading her to where he hid all of the “loot.” Well Miss. Appear caught the campus thief, and the follower of Miss. Appear figured out who she is. I won’t say who she is for her privacy, but she has overcome one of her fears (see Super Interview on Page 2). The thief was none other than George Tanke. JUSTICE IS SERVED!
October 22nd, 2007 at 1:34 pm
I think your writing is awesome and very detailed.
I like how you are talking like a real reporter would be. you put in details like who was the thief, what was being stolen, and the interview on page 2. I don’t think anything should be changed for this post .
What I didn’t understand is that you said that she had overcome one of her fears i didn’t know if it was Miss. Appear or the reporter, like maybe you could say “see super interview on how she overcame her fears and much more. it is just a suggestion though. but other than that it is great.