http://emstourtelot.learnerblogs.org/2007/10/22/superhero-news-event/ Just another Learnerblogs.org weblog Tue, 02 Dec 2008 07:43:20 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=wordpress-mu-1.2.5 http://emstourtelot.learnerblogs.org/2007/10/22/superhero-news-event/#comment-2 einsteinhonschke Mon, 22 Oct 2007 20:34:47 +0000 http://emstourtelot.learnerblogs.org/2007/10/22/superhero-news-event/#comment-2 I think your writing is awesome and very detailed. I like how you are talking like a real reporter would be. you put in details like who was the thief, what was being stolen, and the interview on page 2. I don't think anything should be changed for this post . What I didn't understand is that you said that she had overcome one of her fears i didn't know if it was Miss. Appear or the reporter, like maybe you could say "see super interview on how she overcame her fears and much more. it is just a suggestion though. but other than that it is great. I think your writing is awesome and very detailed.
I like how you are talking like a real reporter would be. you put in details like who was the thief, what was being stolen, and the interview on page 2. I don’t think anything should be changed for this post .
What I didn’t understand is that you said that she had overcome one of her fears i didn’t know if it was Miss. Appear or the reporter, like maybe you could say “see super interview on how she overcame her fears and much more. it is just a suggestion though. but other than that it is great.

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